The Child Inside me
When I was a child,
Mummy used to say....
Child is like God..
Without fear, dishonesty
And a sense of deception....
I told myself......
I would never let it die
“The Child Inside Me”.
I grew up...
Experienced the world around me...
I was surrounded by
All the hidden factors
Sufficient to kill
“The Child Inside Me”.
But,
I didn’t give-up.
I was fighting with myself
To keep someone alive.....
I have grown up......
I have been told several times
“To become mature and
So called Professional”
I will have to kill the child
Inside me.....
But, I can’t kill someone....
Someone...so close to me...
I have two options....
Either,
Go too far from this world....
“Missing you Papa”
Want to come to you....
Or,
To go to someone
Who created this “Child Inside me”
Want to spend rest of my life
“With you Mummy”
But,
One thing is for sure.....
I can’t be a murderer
Of “The Child Inside Me”........
21 comments:
really great i am glad to have a brother like u.
Thanks Anshu Didi....
sounds good sir..so at last u made it after juggling around for 10 months..nice poem sir..
Ur's Junior
Guess Who??
nice one.. wht the crap is manager stuff makin out of us:(
:)
Thanx Dominic.....
bhaiya 10 month ke mehnat bujha rahal achhi poem padhla s.u r really a great & genious my brother.keep rising..............
nice work...
next time write some thing a bit less serious :-)
keep rocking pathak...
nice poem....
keep it up...
pathak rocks! good to know that u have started penning down ur thots... keep going pathak, nice poem...
amazing.......very nice and so true...hats off to you
Never ever let go off the child inside you bro... that is what makes you stand apart in this crowd of "mature and professional" hypocrites...
Pathak...its really touching poem...i loved it..show the true image of urs..Superb..words cannot express the simplicity and the feeling of the poem..Hats OFF to u buddy
Pathak, this is really touching.... never let the child inside you die, this very child makes you what you are.... and you are best as you are...
dats realiy grt,,fantabulous,,CHEERS yar so sentiii,Aacha likhte ho,,God bless,,,May he b wid u alwz 2 keep ur feelings alive,,,
pathak ossum poem.. u spoke my mind!!
keep writing dude..its damn touching
its marvellous sir ji
nice poem meetu..keep it up..put ur old one also here...
Cries unheard... speaking volumes of the abyss, the void, which persists n plagues...unseen, still very much there...we are a part of the structure; we complicate things for ourselves...n it has no end...you are right...the child yearns...but lend it a hand n it will survive the chaos...amidst the turmoil...the ray of hope never dies...it won’t....ever....
really nice one...got to know other side of playback singer :)
Really Abhishek...this is a new side of you...such a touchy one.....!!!!
someone once had told me, "if there is no sorrow, no poem in you will emerge..." good to go...also share some light ones...which we can laugh on...Keep going with the spirit on penning down your thoughts...that's also an achievement...
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